HOW WERE THE NEW EPISODES? Yay or nay?
I saw them. Wanna hear from you guys.
IT’S MY TUMBLR BIRTHDAY TODAY!!! So I did read some fanfics over my inactive imprisonment (that were unexpectedly s**t) But in the meantime (when I get something worth my attention), I’ll post these high rez pics that I couldn’t tweet! Time flies pretty quickly. Anyways, HAVE FUN ADMIRING THESE SO AWESOME PONY PICS of Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Pinkie Pie!!!!!!!!!!!!! /)^3^(\
Sorry if I had remain inactive for a while now. APs are killers and I try my best to fit all this into my roster. I got involved with background vocals for a track (which was this track) => CHECK OUT VLADNUKE’S DEBUT TRACK Live Another Life (ft. ChisanaAI) (DL in the description) (by vladnuke) !!!! Give him the support he deserves! Gotta go now. Gonna read Fight Club for AP English Language. f**k
Again, the title is self-explanatory. Not writing a review until the third chapter comes… it would a little annoying to have to rate stuff that isn’t completed.
Oh ok, when you write, (i feel like my english teacher saying this) you need to have two things to keep the reader interested. (1) suspense & (2) coherence. A good adventure has to capture this vibe that wants you to be psychologically affected from either the foreshadowing or the relatable characters or both. I suggest ending the chapter with a suspense foreshadowing the possible events of the next chapter. Leave a mystery that is later reveal or possibly never revealed (have the reader figure this textual jigsaw)… TBH, I’m writing my first fiction short story, I still need to write more of it. Also, be careful with the god awful grammar nazis. Sometimes they can get butt-hurt about a colon that’s used a period (sarcasm). The most important in any fanfic is how original you can toy around with the copy-righted material. Long before the EqG shitstorm, MLD proved to capture feels from the moment you start reading it (i’m pretty sure you know how MLD starts and ends since you are a brony afterall). In relation to and before EqG, it had this mainstream idea among the brony fandom to have the human universe and the MLP universe cross overing (which usually is looked upon as a bad thing in free forum boards). Hopefully you’ll get out of this essay of mine that these concepts will help and if so, make you successful either inside or outside of the brony fandom. Who knows?
Hope This Helped Ya,